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Is this a good narrative poem?
It’s for an ela project and it has to be about something beautiful, so i wrote about the beach in Europe where my aunt lives. It’s supposed to be at least 20 lines? Is it at least okay?
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Let the sun shine,
with a cool breeze,
Let me feel the heat on my skin.
Let me smell that salty ocean air,
and feel that soft warm sand,
while i hear the sounds,
of people talking and,
music quietly playing.
Let me hear the wind blowing,
And the ocean waves crashing against one another.
Let me feel that sand,
tingling on my feet,
It makes me feel free.
I can be anything and anyone,
No one will say anything.
To feel free is the best,
i love it oh-so much.
where the sun shines,
and the cool breeze blows,
Let me, Be here.
What did you think?
It’s really good for a start! Try to improve your capitalization and punctuation, and try to equalize the number of lines in one stanza. Hope this helps, and good luck with your project!
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